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#1 Old 26th Oct 2014 at 8:17 AM
Creating EMMA STONE [need feedback]
hello guys, it's been awhile since I've start creating sims in sims 3 and some of my pending works hahahha sorry for that, btw
i'll have to make this sim requested by my friend it's a deal if i can create this sim she will treat me a dinner hahahah...

For now this is what i've made so far....






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need your feedback thanks, comments/suggestions are welcome

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#2 Old 26th Oct 2014 at 9:31 AM
Good luck with getting feedback on your sim. I have three up and not one person has given me any criticism of feedback. I think I must have a contagious disease. ha ha.

Tell you what, you do mine and I'll do yours. I have two Pretty Llittle Liars and one Dr Who. Thanks

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#3 Old 26th Oct 2014 at 3:17 PM
//Update-----------------
I tweak some of her nose and chicks..


Compare it here:


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#4 Old 26th Oct 2014 at 3:54 PM
Hi Mr D

Firstly, it would be more helpful, if you could put the real person and the sim side by side.
Then a pic of her looking straight at the camera, not up, not down straight at the camera.

Her eyebrows are not the right shape, try another preset.
Her eye colour is way off, it needs to be more of a blue-green. Look for some eyes in downloads.
Her eyes need to be smaller, they are too big.

Try and work on these and I'll have a look again.

Thank you for looking at my sims and giving me feedback.
The gap between her nose and her top lip needs to be smaller. She has a very small gap there.

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#5 Old 27th Oct 2014 at 1:07 AM
thanks Audrey for the feedback

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#6 Old 27th Oct 2014 at 2:57 AM
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about your tip I haven't download yet the customs eye for her but the alternative will do...



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#7 Old 27th Oct 2014 at 3:15 AM
Good job so far; I'm sure it won't be long before you earn your dinner.

Regarding the general shape of her head, it could use to be more slender and a pinch longer. Also, notice that her head is tilted in the profile shot; it looks like the Sim's profile could be pulled out a bit more.

The Sim has very large eyes right now, but perhaps that's a stylistic decision to match the game's style? Anyway, the upper eye apex could use to be rounded a little more to the center, but not too much more. Also, I think her eyebrows should be rotated more to give her less of a frown.

Her upper lip could use to be just a little bit thicker, I think.
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#8 Old 27th Oct 2014 at 3:32 PM
Hi Mr D

Eyebrows are too thin.
Her eyes need to be smaller, they are too big.
Pupils are too big.
Her nose has an obvious bobble on the end which is not there in the real person.
The fleshy part of her nostrils need to be a bit wider.
Her nose in side view has a slight bump and is a bit turned up at the ends in the real person.
The gap between her upper lip and nose needs to be much smaller.

Just a few things. :0

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#9 Old 28th Oct 2014 at 10:26 AM
i will be delaying to post the update of this sim... thanks...

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#10 Old 20th Nov 2014 at 8:10 AM
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sorry for a long delay this is what I've done so far....



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#11 Old 21st Nov 2014 at 2:24 PM
no feed back?? I guess I have to upload it now thanks by the way to all who look it and give some feed backs on the past month

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#12 Old 21st Nov 2014 at 7:13 PM
I would make the eyes a bit smaller, try to find a slightly better eyebrow and give her a pinker lip. Also The hair/hair color doesn't seem very Emma. Someone just a bit more orange would work, the hair as of now seems a bit too Ariel from the Little Mermaid
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#13 Old 4th Jul 2015 at 10:12 PM
I really think you are on the right track as I recognized her right away. You have captured Emma's look now just a couple of tweaks like is mentioned by other and you have a fantastic looking emma. I would download her now but i will wait till you are satisfied...

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#14 Old 20th Jul 2017 at 1:35 AM
I want download this. please, give me link)
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